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Post by hello on Oct 20, 2007 19:01:20 GMT -5
Title: Two Lovers
Rating: umm ... K+ to T I suppose ... 
Summery: Two lovers enjoy a favourite past time.
Authour's Note: wow, my first bella/voldie anything! ... yes, please be gentle!
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Post by Voodoo Dolly on Oct 20, 2007 19:05:37 GMT -5
Perhaps it's just my pervy mind but until I reached the last two stanzas I definately saw how this could have been hinting at both murder or something rather more tangy. Fabulous work hun great imagery espacially in the last stanza.
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Post by roxanne on Oct 20, 2007 20:29:52 GMT -5
wow
that is so amazing. Really, i love it.
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hello
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Post by hello on Oct 21, 2007 12:00:01 GMT -5
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wickedbella
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'My Lord... my Lord...' she spoke as if to a lover.
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Post by wickedbella on Oct 21, 2007 12:34:10 GMT -5
WOW that's cool hello!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hello
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Post by hello on Oct 21, 2007 12:37:28 GMT -5
[/b]. *soo sorry i don't remember your name!  *[/font][/ul] |
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wickedbella
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Post by wickedbella on Oct 21, 2007 15:17:01 GMT -5
What do you mean you don't remember my name? Perhaps this is a stupid question but I don't understand
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hello
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Post by hello on Oct 21, 2007 15:56:46 GMT -5
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Post by wickedwitch on Oct 22, 2007 12:16:51 GMT -5
Beautiful poem! I think the words are very well choosen.
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hello
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Post by hello on Oct 28, 2007 13:39:23 GMT -5
[/b] ;D. btw, i love your sig :]].[/font][/ul] |
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Post by nappyfreak on Mar 18, 2008 2:53:21 GMT -5
that's really good...great poem
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Post by *ophelia* on Mar 18, 2008 17:57:04 GMT -5
Really really good, really powerful writing. You have to write more!!!
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