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Post by hello on Oct 21, 2007 16:07:00 GMT -5
Title:The Only Love Rating: M *is for M&Ms* Summery:Has Tom Riddle ever felt Love?
Authour's Note:Poem #2!! Yes, it's steamy, but I really hope it fits them ... Kind of just came to me. Literally lol. Anyways, reviews are superbly wanted, and much appreciated. Enjoy!
[/i] Not a word she utters Not a syllable As she slides into bed His cool form Is instantly Afire Gently, She slides herself atop him Finding a comfortable place Before shedding her robe Her naked form Glows in the moonlight Her frizzed curls framing her face Perfectly Hastily He rolls them Her body Her soul Having aroused ever pour in his body. She groans at the Feeling of his manhood Pressing harshly against Her naked thigh He nips at Her shoulder His jagged teeth leaving Pink marks on her Pale flesh Soon He joins her In nudity and In skin Faster Faster BellaHe pants My LordShe groans Suddenly Climax Stars blast Behind their eyes Limbs tingle Muscles contract The only Love Tom Riddle ever felt Was the Love Of a woman His woman His Bella.[/ul][/font]
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Post by Voodoo Dolly on Oct 21, 2007 17:14:11 GMT -5
Wow - yes that was rather tangy indeed. Wonderufl though espacially the last stanza and his simple 'why are you here?' great work hun I do so love your poetry.
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Post by hello on Oct 21, 2007 17:42:28 GMT -5
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wickedbella
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'My Lord... my Lord...' she spoke as if to a lover.
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Post by wickedbella on Oct 22, 2007 2:10:50 GMT -5
Wow hello it's beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by wickedwitch on Oct 22, 2007 6:34:31 GMT -5
Wow, great! What an awesome poem. I hope you are gonna write much more!
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Post by bellatrixje on Oct 25, 2007 9:53:51 GMT -5
I really like it! Great poem and I love the way Voldie thinks !
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Post by hello on Oct 28, 2007 13:36:00 GMT -5
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*ophelia*
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*Bellatrix Lestrange* "only room for one half blood in her life"
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Post by *ophelia* on Feb 26, 2008 12:20:49 GMT -5
Really Amazing!
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Post by trickibee on Apr 12, 2008 5:50:33 GMT -5
Loved it. Especially the last stanza. 2 sided Boldy love is heaven
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Post by akakyoak on Apr 2, 2012 16:48:35 GMT -5
Two sided Voldetrix (or Bellamort, whichever ;-D) Wow. 'What are you doing here?' oh god!
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