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« Thread Started on Nov 7, 2007, 3:15pm » | ![[Quote]](http://s4.images.proboards.com/buttons/quote.gif) |
Yes, another poem from the wickedwitch  I almost never wrote one in my entire life until a few weeks ago, and now I can't stop. I was trying to study geography, and out of nowhere I made a few sentences up. This evening I wrote some more, mixed it up a bit and edited it.
So here it is, another Bella/Voldie poem. I hope you'll like it. 
She gave him her heart
She gave him her heart
But he didn抰 realize it
She dreamed about him
Longed for him
Craved for him
Prayed for him
But he didn抰 notice
She did everything he wanted
Fulfilled all his missions
Succeeded all his tasks
Obeyed all his demands
But he didn抰 notice
At the moment she died
He had felt something special
Something he抎 never felt before
At that moment he realized
She had been someone special
Only when she died
He knew he had been loved
And that he抎 never
experience that again
But then it was too late
She gave him her life
One scream from him
made clear to himself
the feelings he had
never noticed before
When he passed away
not long after she died
he knew it was because
he had lost her and
would never get her back
Only then her blind loyalty
Her worship, her sacrifices
That look in her eyes
The way she spoke
Made sense to him
He was so ashamed
so regretful
He hated himself
for being so selfish
that he hadn抰 noticed her
She had always given him
everything
Had always done
anything
whatever he wished
Why had he never seen
her affection for him
His most loyal servant
and the only woman
who had ever cared
She had given him her heart
But he realized it too late
Why couldn抰 they have had
more time together
Why couldn抰 he have told her
he was too scared
to let anyone come close
He抎 give everything
just to see her once more
and tell her what she meant to him
He抎 give everything
to hear her say she loved him
She had given him her life
And she would do it again
He gave his life to be with her
And he would do it again
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wickedbella
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'My Lord... my Lord...' she spoke as if to a lover.
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« Reply #1 on Nov 7, 2007, 3:28pm » | |
OOOOOOOOH this is really beautiful Marian!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Really!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awwwwww poor Bella!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You know, when Voldemort screams, that's one of my fave things of the book. I see it like the proof that he loved her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can read that over and over again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh it's SOOOOO beautiful in your poem that they die for each other!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But hey I have to go... So bye!!!
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« Reply #2 on Nov 7, 2007, 3:31pm » | |
Thanks you so much!!! I'm glad you liked it
Well I haven't bought the book yet but when I have I will read that part over and over again, now I'm so obsessed with Bella I want to read everything about her again
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« Reply #3 on Nov 10, 2007, 5:35am » | |
awww heartbreaking  Wonderful piece though very touching I loved how he only clicked on in the last few minutes
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wickedwitch
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Bellatrix leaned towards Voldemort, for mere words could not demonstrate her longing for closeness.
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« Reply #4 on Nov 16, 2007, 4:10am » | |
I'm glad you liked it, Kaitlyn
I like the idea that Voldemort realizes at the very last moment that Bella was in love with him 
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« Reply #5 on Mar 18, 2008, 5:41pm » | |
OMG!!! That was an absolute heartmelter! It was so beautiful, I can't get over it! Maybe that's even what J.K.R. had in mind too? OMG, it is just a perfect way to round off the depressing end they have!!!
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Bellatrix leaned towards Voldemort, for mere words could not demonstrate her longing for closeness.
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« Reply #6 on Mar 19, 2008, 1:29pm » | |
Aw, thanks so much for the compliments
To be honest, I wonder if Rowling was thinking at all when she killed poor Bella Just kidding But still...
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« Reply #7 on Mar 24, 2008, 12:17pm » | |
I bet she did, Voldy only ever screamed for himself before, but he was alright, yet she was dead, it makes sense. I think...
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